Review Detail of Naturesin in SpeedBound

Author, My dear author the ideas are good but the story is too fast paced, the character of only the main protagonist is developing that also malnourished, other characters are not planned totally; it looks like a Hodge-podge. You should first plan the characters of the marvel characters ( i.e the changes that you want to do; pairing you plan to do; etc.) then try to imagine their interaction with each others and the world around them. You have the world build there for you already and since you are only focusing on MCU keep the time line with you. The amount of story you have posted by now could have been atleast 20 chapters. if this is your first time writing a story you should forget about grammar and spelling and first make the charaster development seriously; forget about the interaction of author with reader and focus on making the story pleasing from your point of view..