Review Detail of Kintaro498 in Out for Karma: One Piece

My complaint is the same as everyone else, the story was really good until when he leave the Marines. At first I was adamant about him never leaving the Marines, but with the Celestial Dragon situation I actually understood that he had to leave. Unfortunately it was clear that the author wanted something and he went to great lenghts to get were he wanted. And what he wanted was: MC will be part of the Strawhats, and for that he needed 2 things, first the time gap was wide, that's why MC ended up choosing to be secluded from the world for 10 years, and the second and worst part of it, he couldn't be stronger than the Strawhats. We've seen this multiple times, it's impossible to have a good canon story if the MC is insanely stronger than the challenges. That's why he made another two things happen to nerf him, first of all he found a way to impossibilitate him from learning Haki, we all know Haki in the first half of grand line is literaly cheating, but not only that, the MC also spended his 10 years secluded without training even a little bit, result? As a 18 years old he was a super genius on the marines, and at 28 years old he can't even beat Crocodile, my guy passes out from trying to stop rubble with the gravity fruit... then we continue with canon, with a parasite in the crew just existing, just sad tbh, really liked the early chapters, I even cried in one of the sad moments. Just my opinion, no hate. Much love.