This was a great read man. The character personality were great to the maximum extent. But i gave 4 for the world background cause most of the world ideas were predictable. Like the bedsheets and the snow from the hole the vast view of the snow path outside etc etc. What really shocked me was the character desing and how they had their own thoughts about the MC. But nome was the most mysterious one. Tough the MC is a mystery himself. The story development is like soo soothing to readike u r in the story itself. Well i gave 4 star for translation quality because i don't know much about these new words in the story about the different tribe living in your world. But still the story development like what. R u trying to give me goosebumps man man 🤣 U know this could be a manga if u published it. And don't u dare assume i give u all 5 star just cause i am friend ya know.😏 Pls don't kill me for the long coment.😶 Hope u keep up the good work. I want to know what happens next. It,a been a great read. 😊
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