Well, first I need to say that I'm not really into stories which take place in kingdom and all. I have a hard time keeping up and being immersed in the story. But this story is well written, what I mean is that the author had done a good job in the first chapters by already setting the plot and the characters. World Background: Good description of the world background!! Writing Quality: There are a few grammatical mistakes or sentences that can be written differently. Characters design: the author did a good job describing the characters since the first chapter, we roughly know their behaviors since the beginning, I'm waiting to see the development of the Fl she seems too dull for me now. Keep going!! For people who like this genre, you should give this story a try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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