I think the author did well in developing his/her characters. But I can see some room more improvement. I think a bit more description than dialogues would be good. As for writing quality, I did find in two to three sentence that I feel can be reword differently for better reading flow. Other than everything seem fine. In regard to world background, like I said before more descriptions is need. I would love to know more about the story's world. Since there's a princess, will there be magic, any magical creatures, or interesting settings? As the story is still in progress, I think from the latest chapters so far, the story is good. It's also going at a good pace, not too fast or slow. Also of now, with the latest chapter in, I see a cliffhanger occurring. Can't wait till they switch! And last words of encouragement to the author: You are doing great! Keep writing awesomely!

Great story. There are many characters in this story but the two main contrasting characters are Lily a village girl whose dreams of working in the palace are shattered and Emily a princess who shattered her dreams. At first, you found both of them not likeable (for me not liking Lily was a personal choice I liked Emily more than lily). But villains are not completely evil, let's see their back story in this series. In this journey, we have two princes one who believes in love Leo and the other is quite loose. Writing Quality - It was good grammatical errors here and there but it didn't affect my reading. I think the thoughts of the characters are too long. Story development - The plot starts with showing friendship, first love, jealousy. But I think there can still be an improvement. Character design - I think it's flawed a little bit. The character seems too plot-driven like if Emily is a jealous princess (I thought of her as such), it still doesn't change the fact she a royalty someone surviving in the palace. How can she make a stupid discussion of going in the forest at night alone? She doesn't have backing from her father (from the flashback of him crushing flowers under his feet) her mother is dead. That means she survived on her own in the palace so why doesn't she use her brain in that situation, we can say she has never been in the village but still. Updating stability - Creation is hard I will give props to the author here. World background - The setting is a fantasy world but more can be done in this. Will I recommend this story? Yes, I will. keep up the great work author 😁👍.

Hi author, well thought out story. Characters are nicely designed and the author has got her own unique way to write. There are minor spelling errors which I believe, will be improve by the time. So, dear author, continue with your good work. My best wishes!

Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. Royalty themed novels are my favorite of all the time. Character Emily and Lilly i want to see how they developed in future. specially Emily. And it has great potential. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.

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yay! I like it! A great story for people who fantasy and romance! The characters are well developed and its a fun world that the author has created! there are a few issues here and there with grammar but it doesn't stop the flow of reading at all! Keep it up!

Nice story. It effectively projects the lifes and stories of the characters while adhering to the plot. Also, the plot is interesting and surely worth reading. The characters are also well developed and can be differentiated by actions and words.

Writing Quality: Perfect but some minor grammatical errors here and there but it's fine, and didn't affect much the reading!! Story development/ work background: Vast, medium-paced, exquisite and could be more descriptive towards the world in the fantasy but royalty setting could be seen!! Character design: The characters are well portrayed and describing them in detail made the visualization of them better!! comparing the two main female characters I liked Emily better. My thoughts: It's a good read and I'm in love with the book. The story has great potential and would love to see how the story goes further. Highly recommended!! keep up the good work, author! Kudos!!

At first I thought that this would be any normal romance novel, but after reading the story I was amazed how you wrote everything. Everything from the characters and the world is loveable in my opinion, so keep going.

Hi author, your book is nice and worth reading. The character lily makes me smile, she's quite ambitious but with good reason. Your grammar is fine, wayyyyyy better than mine but the discrimination of actions of the characters needs alittle work. Aside from that the book is a nice one. Well done author.