Review Detail of ldhoonie in Sparror Volume 1
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I love the way the author writes and how he/she describes the scenery, what the people looked, and wore. But, too much details in a chapter would sometimes make the readers feel bored(maybe it's just my preference, who knows there may be other people who liked elaborate details). I suggest the author to only describe things that are important for the story to progress. Of course, describing things doesn't really hurt much but I hope that the author would keep it in moderation as well. That's all. Keep up the good work, author~ fighting!
Sparror Volume 1
JJ_Prakoso
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JJ_Prakoso:Thank you very much for the commentary and the review that you make. I really appreciate your opinion and your suggestion of how to write detail can be helpful for the future of this book. As for the detailed description and this is my opinion only is to make the world, character appearance, and the surroundings clearer. Also, I just like being details sometimes....hehe. Anyway cheers and thank you very much.image
Thank you very much for the commentary and the review that you make. I really appreciate your opinion and your suggestion of how to write detail can be helpful for the future of this book. As for the detailed description and this is my opinion only is to make the world, character appearance, and the surroundings clearer. Also, I just like being details sometimes....hehe. Anyway cheers and thank you very much.
ldhoonie:you're doing good! I like the way you write just make sure to explain things less frequently ^_^