Review Detail of Omnitheus in A Poisonous Kiss Of A Siren

Rating it 5/5, review after finishing all 6 chapters. The poetic writing style in first person is refreshing to see in a myth based story. It creates dynamics as the MC's POV will give you a detailed exposition. It has minimal lapses which didn't really affect the readability. I must say, I don't exactly know what's the right pace for a romance story but I think the pacing was just right. There's still a lot of questions revolving the MC, like why was she helped by that voice in the first place? I'd like to see how the author will bridge that mystery. While the MC's character is well detailed, it sometimes took off the characteristic of other characters. The side characters sometimes lack distinction. One good way to make other characters stand out is to give them mannerism or give the MC a unique perspective of that other character. I like Greek Myth so I would be kinda bias when I say I liked it. Thought I'm not into too much romance stories, fictional stories based on Myths really catches my eyes, as it interests me how the author would employ the existing myths to his/her own universe. Good job!