Review Detail of runman7012 in Secret Marriage to Test Compatability : the Wife is Poisoned

I am “almost” enjoying the story. My only gripe, and I hope it’s something that gets fixed if the novel is picked up, is the constant mix up in pronouns and it sometimes being unclear who’s speaking. Well, I guess that’s more than one gripe lol. But seriously, the pronoun error is way to frequent, and takes me out of immersion. It’s the biggest problem with the story, aside from a seemingly strong, but actually weak FL, and story progression all over the place, it’s to the point that I don’t really care if it gets picked up or not.