feels like it was written by a grade schooler. definitely on the list of trash novels not worth wasting time on, but not the absolute worst on this platform plot is a mixture of contrived nonsense and cliches and illogical thought processes. feels like the love child of a bad fan-fic of some bad isekai novel met a bad cultivation novel, and then the scenes were chopped up and thrown together. i think the author had some scenes from other novels in mind and tried to recreate them into his poorly thought out story. not the worst on this platform, but it is on the list of trash i don't want to read. could have genuinely been written by a kid. if so, sorry for the scathing review, maybe come back to writing after you have more experience/graduate from grade-school? if you enjoy this novel: my condolences, the webnovel app must have taken it's toll on you. I feel your pain, there are many bad stories on here, but try to recover, maybe pick up a "professional" novel every now and then so as to dilute your sinking standards with something of quality?
Half-Fated Sir
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