Review Detail of proking in Night Reaper: The Hidden Crusade

After reading this novel, I got the vibe of 'The Boys' Amazon orginal series. The only thing different here is that the world already know about the heroes being made through lab experiments. I think this novel has potential. The story line was nice so far. The writing quality is decent. However, there are some things which were lacking. First, the introduction of characters was poorly done. When you need to name the character yourself from the start...it spoils the fun for the readers, to get to know him/her through the interactions as in a movie or series, there is no narrator or an author introducing characters like that. The watchers get to know them through the flow of the story. And that's how the character development takes place. So, author should keep that in mind. Moreover, the way the author organized the paragraphs is out of ordinary. It is unique but it's unnecessary tbh. If you follow what every novel has done so far, you'll get to know the readers are comfortable reading such a writing format well than other styles. Although it's up to you, if you want to take the advice or not. This is only a suggestion as per my knowledge. Hope you understand, author. The dialogues are very well done and story pace is decent so far. I have no qualms about the overall, only it would look better if you put some more effort in other sections. 👍🤔 Good Luck and Keep it up!