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Infinite Clone System
DescriptionPanda
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Muhammad_Usama1:My friend. Your story has great potential. It can reach the level of The Swallowed Star and The Strongest System as long as it is handeled carefully. I can give you a few points based on my experience because I am greatly interested in it. 1. Dont involve faceslapping too much in it. Even if a case comes, it must be based on reality. 2. Dont make the entire population overly stupid and single minded. Base the world intelligence on the human intelligence in reality. 3. Dont make the mc overly intelligent. Make him suffer defeats and mistakes. Make it more lifelike. 4. Dont make all the enemies muscle heads who only know how to run headfirst towards the mc while shouting stupid things. For example produce intellectual geniuses and sage elders who outwit mc on many clashes. Mc barely survives due to the system 5. Dont make mc a typical "eat, get strong, chase skirts, sleep and then repeat" character. Develop mc. let him experience the vissitudes of life. let him suffer uncountable pains and sufferings. let him feel happiness. make him reach the pinnacle of what a human can achieve in moralities, spirituality and wisdom. make him the human champion. 6. Dont ruin the novel with skirt chasings. If you want to involve female lead, quickly make them married and be off with it. Dont waste time in useless dramas. And make this couple the legendary couple. 7. Dont expand the magnitude of the world too quickly. First let the mc digest everything in his current environment and then expand the scale of the world. 8. Dont divide the attention of the mc into many things. like the saying dont become the rider of many boats. you will become confused and then lost. First concentrate on a single thing and make mc reach perfection in it. 9. Dont make the things repetative as the novel progresses. let the mc experience new things. there are countless possibilities. 10. Dedicate some of your time on the novel and keep everything planned. Keep the grammer good, hire the editor if you can. and keep up the upload frequency. I know these things require great work and time. But friend, if you try to work hard on my 10 points, you can make your novel reach the pinnacle of human works.
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My friend. Your story has great potential. It can reach the level of The Swallowed Star and The Strongest System as long as it is handeled carefully. I can give you a few points based on my experience because I am greatly interested in it. 1. Dont involve faceslapping too much in it. Even if a case comes, it must be based on reality. 2. Dont make the entire population overly stupid and single minded. Base the world intelligence on the human intelligence in reality. 3. Dont make the mc overly intelligent. Make him suffer defeats and mistakes. Make it more lifelike. 4. Dont make all the enemies muscle heads who only know how to run headfirst towards the mc while shouting stupid things. For example produce intellectual geniuses and sage elders who outwit mc on many clashes. Mc barely survives due to the system 5. Dont make mc a typical "eat, get strong, chase skirts, sleep and then repeat" character. Develop mc. let him experience the vissitudes of life. let him suffer uncountable pains and sufferings. let him feel happiness. make him reach the pinnacle of what a human can achieve in moralities, spirituality and wisdom. make him the human champion. 6. Dont ruin the novel with skirt chasings. If you want to involve female lead, quickly make them married and be off with it. Dont waste time in useless dramas. And make this couple the legendary couple. 7. Dont expand the magnitude of the world too quickly. First let the mc digest everything in his current environment and then expand the scale of the world. 8. Dont divide the attention of the mc into many things. like the saying dont become the rider of many boats. you will become confused and then lost. First concentrate on a single thing and make mc reach perfection in it. 9. Dont make the things repetative as the novel progresses. let the mc experience new things. there are countless possibilities. 10. Dedicate some of your time on the novel and keep everything planned. Keep the grammer good, hire the editor if you can. and keep up the upload frequency. I know these things require great work and time. But friend, if you try to work hard on my 10 points, you can make your novel reach the pinnacle of human works.
Muhammad_Usama1:My friend. Your story has great potential. It can reach the level of The Swallowed Star and The Strongest System as long as it is handeled carefully. I can give you a few points based on my experience because I am greatly interested in it. 1. Dont involve faceslapping too much in it. Even if a case comes, it must be based on reality. 2. Dont make the entire population overly stupid and single minded. Base the world intelligence on the human intelligence in reality. 3. Dont make the mc overly intelligent. Make him suffer defeats and mistakes. Make it more lifelike. 4. Dont make all the enemies muscle heads who only know how to run headfirst towards the mc while shouting stupid things. For example produce intellectual geniuses and sage elders who outwit mc on many clashes. Mc barely survives due to the system 5. Dont make mc a typical "eat, get strong, chase skirts, sleep and then repeat" character. Develop mc. let him experience the vissitudes of life. let him suffer uncountable pains and sufferings. let him feel happiness. make him reach the pinnacle of what a human can achieve in moralities, spirituality and wisdom. make him the human champion. 6. Dont ruin the novel with skirt chasings. If you want to involve female lead, quickly make them married and be off with it. Dont waste time in useless dramas. And make this couple the legendary couple. 7. Dont expand the magnitude of the world too quickly. First let the mc digest everything in his current environment and then expand the scale of the world. 8. Dont divide the attention of the mc into many things. like the saying dont become the rider of many boats. you will become confused and then lost. First concentrate on a single thing and make mc reach perfection in it. 9. Dont make the things repetative as the novel progresses. let the mc experience new things. there are countless possibilities. 10. Dedicate some of your time on the novel and keep everything planned. Keep the grammer good, hire the editor if you can. and keep up the upload frequency. I know these things require great work and time. But friend, if you try to work hard on my 10 points, you can make your novel reach the pinnacle of human works.
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