Item: Sanctuary: Charles Xavier
Rating: 2
Author: Plebston323

Plebston323Lv22yr

2022-09-13 00:32

Writing quality: Mistakes here and there, but not so bad. I recommend Grammarly to fix this. 4/5 Stability of Updates: Terrible, dropped. 1/5 Story development: Story is a pale imitation of the original, with little effort in it. 1/5 Character design: The character makes decisions without thinking much, and somehow knows a lot about technology that doesn't exist at 4 because he's a 'super genius' which is a title given to him for only his past knowledge. Hundreds of options and he chooses the lesser ones. 1/5 World background: Pale imitation, 3/5

Sanctuary: Charles Xavier

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where do I find the original?

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I’ve been reading your books for a long time. This is a great story and I hope you turn this into a masterpiece. A lot, of the stories I’ve read by you are pretty short. If you can expand upon this story and truly delve deep into the characters and setting, I don’t mind leaving a nice tip at the hundred chapter mark. Anyway, I think the story is starting off great and if taken the right path could be the most impactful self insert you’ve written. Charles Xavier, has more depth and potential than Pietro could ever have. I’m eagerly awaiting the butterflies. Good luck and thank you.

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