Review Detail of Synthony in Sovereign of the Gods

Item: Sovereign of the Gods
Rating: 5

Review detail

SynthonyLv42yrSynthony

There is a lot of cliche in that novel, that cliche we all love. A boy is unable to cultivate due to somebody problem, a master that reforges his body to allow cultivating, and a dedicated MC. What else do you want more? Just go and read. The only problem I found in this novel is that it had too many long paragraphs, maybe it's just my eyes but I would like to see some breaks to make things easier.

Sovereign of the Gods

Kalki_gsk

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Kalki_gskAuthorKalki_gsk

I have updated teh chapters to make them more readable. :)

2yr

Kalki_gskAuthorKalki_gsk

Thanks Synthony. I am trying to not have grammar mistakes and introducing small elements of fun here and there. However I will take a look at the paragraphs and put a few breaks in there. I plan to write a big novel and I plan to get there 1 chapter at a time. Please read on [img=recommend]

2yr

EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

Does he have anything special? Bloodline? Cultivation method?Soul? Treasure or a special body?

2yr

SynthonyLv4Synthony

He has an immortal master that reforged his body and gave him a special cultivation method. About the particularity of this cultivation method or what kind of power the MC will have, its still too early to say.

Empyrium:Does he have anything special? Bloodline? Cultivation method?Soul? Treasure or a special body?

2yr

Kalki_gskAuthorKalki_gsk

Hi..author here... MC gets the Primordial Chaos Qi and a body that can endure that and circulate this Qi as opposed to normal Qi that other cultivators use. Initially he cant use the Chaos Qi directly as he is still weak and can only split it into derivates like Yin/Yang and then further attributes like Fire, poison etc. He gets into a sect where he plays a Zither so there will be Zither based techniques as well. He will also learn to write runes and use them in practical situations. I dont plan on giving him cheat like powers and make him OP from the start though.

Empyrium:Does he have anything special? Bloodline? Cultivation method?Soul? Treasure or a special body?

2yr

EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

Ohh that makes the novel much better when he plays the zither, hope he will play it often, kind of miss any novel where mc ppays a zither as weapon too

Kalki_gsk:Hi..author here... MC gets the Primordial Chaos Qi and a body that can endure that and circulate this Qi as opposed to normal Qi that other cultivators use. Initially he cant use the Chaos Qi directly as he is still weak and can only split it into derivates like Yin/Yang and then further attributes like Fire, poison etc. He gets into a sect where he plays a Zither so there will be Zither based techniques as well. He will also learn to write runes and use them in practical situations. I dont plan on giving him cheat like powers and make him OP from the start though.

2yr

Kalki_gskAuthorKalki_gsk

Thats the idea. I always imagine Mc chilling on a hil as mobs rush towards him to get killed by his Zither music

Empyrium:Ohh that makes the novel much better when he plays the zither, hope he will play it often, kind of miss any novel where mc ppays a zither as weapon too

2yr