okay so first of the writing is pretty bad,I mean a lot of word are stuck together with no space placed in between them,the are a lot of times that sentence are dropped of on like "everyone saw my red eyes and thought they were." if it was once or twice not bad but a lot is pretty bad. second the character has no depth to him i mean we get barely a sentence long history about him and from what I read so far we have to piece his past life together ourselves,also when he was reincarnated you just blow though his life I mean we're given barely a paragraph of info then bang time skip . it felt like you kept rushing him to power up and to get to canon,then when he gets his grimore (I don't know how to spell it) it was so under played I mean he said that he would barely use it and and the only good things about it was the sword and its looks,we don't even now what technical magic it had all you said was it had two weak spells. there is no depth to how the character is to the world it was barely mentioned that he meet different characters and on top of that there is barely any dialogue,I mean during the exam you only show the broom flying and fighting that's it. so far you have no character interaction,no character depth and so many blanks to fill in it's almost like you want us to fill it in so we can figure everything out ourselves.
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