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Review Detail of Sun23 in How To Tame A Fiery Demon (BL)

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Even though I did not give a full stars, it's because the author only have two chapter in. Nonetheless, I will say that this is a promising story. The beginning was very descriptive, but I think there were a bit of rewording and adjustment needed in order for a better transition onward to the next chapter. Even though I'm bad at verb tense, I felt like there were a bit of issue in the prelude that uses past verb tense that can be change into another form...not sure how to explain this, so for the author I will do an in-comment examples to show where I think the author should make some adjustment. When I read to it the latest chapter, I was a bit confused about the main character regarding the previous chapter. I'm assume the author did not want to explain right away what happen to the main character, after what happen to him at the beginning in the prelude. It was bit mysterious as I wonder what the future chapters is going to be like. In regard to this I think the story has a good plot, just waiting to be shown more in future. I made be a bit harsher in giving such review even when the author only have two chapters, but as I love reading historical Chinese novel more than any other genre I want to express that no matter what I said, this story is very good! So author, keep up the good work!

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How To Tame A Fiery Demon (BL)

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thank you.