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Chase_Xavier_123Lv31yr
2023-05-09 17:03

Writing quality is good so far. I didn't see any clutch words being used. The writer did a great job garnering sympathy from the readers. And I kinda want to see the "experiment on human" plot point being one of the key points of ending of that jerk Mo. And great healing abilities of Mc blood. I want to see every villains mask getting torn too. Otherwise it's similar trope to other modern rebirth c-novels. And we love this trope so 🤷‍♀️. The world background is quite simple with a pinch of mystery and supernatural elements. (of course due to healing and rebirth abilities.) You are doing great author.

Rebirth of The Devil: Locked Memories ??

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