Item: My Marvel Random Power System
Rating: 4

vtkunLv53yr

2021-08-21 19:38

in one side this story is written well enough that any errors can be dismissed and i like overpowered main characters, on the other side it's full of plotholes and out of nowhere nerfs just so he can make side chapters that dont even matter (dont know if im putting this right) and some powers are kinda wrong, shadow clones as an exemple are not hivemind jutsu where you can simply experience everithing at the same time. overall its good enough to kill time if you are bored and dont want to think too much about plot , just an power fantasy.

My Marvel Random Power System

The_Dusk_Ninja

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