The story was brilliant in the first nine acts but later became progressively irrational, another story doomed to failure.πππππππππππππ
BloodStone
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LIKEIt would be good for you to do, another anime novel that ends like Naruto or Anime Dragon Ball, at least you won't have a problem like the novel ends because the manga doesn't end, so you'll avoid the filling altogether, Or you can just rewrite this novel, and this time try to avoid all rational mistakes, thank you for your novel.
BloodStone:Wasn't really what I wanted to hear but it's a valid opinion, thanks for the review.image