Review Detail of geewintG in U.L.S: Rise of HAKHAMANESH

The first few chapters are interesting and has a lot going on, although it feels a little fast-paced. I like the first few bits with the characters since it talked a lot about what sort of person they are and what they stand for. I did struggle with the substitution of quotation marks with parentheses. And one more that the conversation with the Arash's sister was a bit off since it was all small talk, hence it sounded awkward in my head than it was in the story. The writing overall is fine and would recommend. Keep and the good work, author.