Solid story so far. The first chapter leaves you with questions that make you crave more, and the it's pretty interesting. Only peeve I have is the author does this thing where something is establish something such as the MC's eyes being bi-colored, and it reiterate. Which is fine, but I feel the author does it that teeny bit too much in some areas. Other than that, I like it so far. Can't wait to see more author.
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