Here is my thought about this story, the worldbuilding in this book so far it's okay or I can say fine. Yes, I can feel this is a magic novel and I can also feel the cultivation theme. But, I believe the author can make further exploitation on the world such as the environment, the detailed, or even the atmosphere. As for the character, so far they are quite fine and have a good startup especially the Mc Noah. Noah for now is pretty okay...at least, I mean yes a struggle in his life. However, I suggest the author to give more context about his past in the future or even more reactionary towards he lived in for making him more interesting to be rooted for. Overall, that's all I can so for now with this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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no heram. and mc loves to beat anyone he likes it doesn't matter if it's a girl woman or a empress.
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do you want mc to have more female companions
I love solo mc. but yes I will try to give him a gf or wife at some point. no intimate scene .I don't think i will be able to write those. as for friends 🙂 there will be few
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Come on why would he need mates or a wife he literally suffered even his parents and if you make him good with someone it would be a contradiction just imagine hating your parents and all and when you become a name and a status you become befriending don't you really think of humanity a little bit as flawed?
