Review Detail of Write_D_Words in Immortality's Weakness

Writing and Development: This book has a clear idea of what the author wants however, there were a few info dump and redundancy of words. I suggest try to make it a conversation instead if that happens. and every chapter, there is a development but less hook. Character, Stability and Background: In my opinion, dayum I found it sad to know that I can not picture out the 3d character on the Female lead alright. I only got a glimpse of what Mushka looks like but not Franchette. It would be better if the author describe her first. *intense sobbing*. Now moving forward to the stability, the author manage to catch up on the chapters per week so it has no problem at all. In addition, the world background is nice starting from Luzon, or progresses after one chapter to another. It was a good read. Keep writing author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]