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The story has a nice flow and a promising start.The starting scene with the routine of the family is heart-wearming and relaxing but I think it is unnecessary long. Also,the mother's relaxed and cheerful attitude in some part of the books makes it hard for the reader to see her as a grieving parent. A good work,overall. Keep it up!

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Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

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I fixed up some of the things you mentioned so go check it out.