Review Detail of jelem37816 in The One, The Enlightened

Ok, so. I am being brutally honest with you. This novel has one of the greatest potential I have seen in a while. Judging from the synopsis and the chapters released, I can say that I love this. Also keep in mind that this is being written by a teenager (This is stated in the comments of the first chapter and I cannot verify if it's true, I am just describing what I saw). The characters and natural and relatable and you can see the author has some kind of knowledge of character development due to very satisfying details - Akihito's clingy but in a good way traits, Hikari's sudden mood shifts etc. Another thing that amazed me is the thought that was put behind the scenery. The slow paced start gives it time to present the characters and slowly adapt them to the storyline. Only time will tell if this is the next classic or more wasted potential