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2021-08-13 03:26

Wow, I like the back story very much. It is a unique one, and the era of time is also the 1950s. The paragraphs are kind of so tall, but it was fine. Highly recommendation keep going P.S: "she tasted sweet, like oranges, liquid sunshine in my mouth as we kissed, our tongues playing together.”.. oooh i like the description so cute.

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