This book is a good way to pass time if you don’t have anything else to do, but there are better books to be read in this site. Writing: The grammar is actually good compared to many I have read. Update stability: Average, sometimes it goes on hiatus but generally it is updated at least once a week. Story development: The premise of the story is good but that is all there is to it. The way it actually developed was bad, almost to the point of being horrible. Many plot holes, many characters being unlike themselves, abilities being developed without making any sense. I suggest that the author either makes a general plotline before starting a book or get a beta reader or even a friend to flesh out the plot. Character design / development: The worst part of this book. The character is somehow dumb, naive, arrogant, without a pint of common sense and it does not get better as the chapters go on. Either watch anime or movies to get a feel of a character to implement or start the design before you start the story. World background: Standard Naruto world, nothing really bad about it. In general: not a good story, but it is a good start, just need more thoughtfulness and complexity.
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