Review Detail of Breno_Ranyere in Because Your Love Heals Me

I liked the idea but I'm not sure I'm very fond of the execution. The actual story honestly has a fun and interesting plot, but the way it's being told feels a little clunky. There are times when things are being described as if it was a movie script instead of a book. Things like, Alexis opened the fridge. She saw a bottle of milk. Alexis grabbed the milk. She poured some into her cup. It just feels a tad too stiff when imo it could be a little more poetic. Alexis opened the fridge while the worries of her task weighted on her shoulders. She approached the bottle of milk after putting it under her gaze as she opted to rely on its taste to rid herself of her concerns. Things like that to just make the experience less robotic. There is also an absurd reliance on terms like "beutifull, handsome, pretty". Beuty is kinda of a subjective thing and just saying "that person is beutifull" all the time kinda doesn't help me grasp why that person is beutifull. Lastly, the constant praise for Alexis feels really tiresome and ends up having the opposite effect. Its one thing to say a character is successful, it's another to just make them a perfect God in human form loved by everyone and everything. It feels like this novel is constantly trying to tell me what I should think and feel instead of letting me reach the conclusions by myself. 3 chapters in and I feel like I barely know Alexis because most of the text is about describing her instead of showing what she's like when she interacts with people. I don't want to read a description of a character, I want to see a character in action and let myself decide how I feel about her.