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Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv13yr
2021-08-25 20:43

Hmm... this is quite the read. will definitely read it till the end. The plot is intriguing enough, and so are the characters. I'm not particularly a big fan of the overly casual writing at times, and some phrases and sentences needs a rewrite. I'd like to see a deeper side to the characters and just overall improvement to the quality... basically, I'm saying I want more lol. Anyways, good read.

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bubblebunnytea
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oh ma gosh!!!!! I love this book!! there are only 2 chapters but I felt so drawn in!!! now both the novels of author san are my favs!!! the English and destruction is amazing and the characters are always intriguing!!! ahhhhhh~!!! those camping for a seme/gong mc jump right in!!!!! the only thing I'm worried about is the updates... author san regularly, like once every 2 days or so updates the other story so will this story also be getting updates?? if yes, then please tell us ur species 😂 ❤❤❤

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Suoshi
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Honestly? 5 stars. This is such a new concept. I really enjoyed the limited number of chapters there were, and if the author were to update regularly, I would a 100 percent come to read this. Good work, Author, really!

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yumi_0000
yumi_0000Lv10

i love this book , I love the characters especially the bottom🤧💜 he is so cute. The top is so cool. story is well develop and the world background. All in all 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

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Eshal_Shahnawaz
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Wow! I've never like read a book like this so this was a totally new experience! The idea was marvelous! Great book author, looking forward to more chapters! Great start!

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Tiene_Lass
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giving this a '5-star' review despite its low chapter count and lack of updates because the quality far outweighs these shortcomings. the idea is fresh and the writing is smooth and lucid. kudos to the author! please give us more updates hehe

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Ghad. this is sooo amazing.. Hey there my fellow fujoshi! Everything is well written! I didn't expect this kind of relationship, And how I wish it will happen in reality Haha! Please continue this storrrry! I am rooting for this book! Goodluck!! 😊

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I want to revise my previous review because I made a stupid mistake before, lol~ First, I like the cover of this book. It’s neat and clean, the title is very readable. The font is simple but suitable for this book. Then, the synopsis is unique, I think. Instead of a wall of text, it contains more mystery that can attract readers’ curiosity. The story develops quite well. The flow from one chapter to another is quite smooth and enjoyable. The dialogues are light but look smart at the same time. I’ve added this book to my library, and I’m expecting for more chapters 😘

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dead_oop
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This is just BEAUTIFUL~ Won me over in the first few chapters, it doesn't happen often. I love how you described everything. Emotions, their movements, surrounding are described perfectly. I love the characters~~ Also, I am wondering if the author is hitting us something with number 69 *smirks* There are some grammatical mistakes, if you fix that it's gonna be just perfect!

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This novel took me on adventures from faraway galaxies to underwater worlds and everywhere in between. The novel is set in the future, and deal with the consequences of technological and scientific advances which enlightened the writers writing proficiency in steampunk, I would recommend this novel.

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