Review Detail of Blizzard_22 in A Zombifying Experience

Overall I think this could be a good story about zombies and the characters journey in this apocalypse world. However, the quality of the writing is quite terrible. I have trouble reading this mostly because I get confused so much that i have to reread every paragraph. The choice of words used in the novel is not artistic and is choppy at best, and so far I know almost nothing about the current world. The way she is introduced to zombies and how to kill them/survive in this world is through a kids essay, which could be complete nonsense and might have nothing to do with the current zombies. I would love to keep reading this, but until the quality of the novel increases significantly, all i can do is recommend that the story be rewritten completely.