Worldbuilding: World-building is one of the best web novels so far based on my reading experience. It had vivid imagery, a well-detailed description of each place, and an enlivened atmosphere, especially on the coliseum scene. Even this novel has a lot of variety with races such as human, elf, and many more. Character: I do like that all the characters in this novel are very diverse, not only the race, but they appear too. Each of them is very distinct from one another. I am also very gladful that the author gives some pictures about the character's appearance which is very impressive. Even the personality of the characters is also distinct too. However, there is one nitpicky opinion from mine and I am very sorry to say this. Sometimes the author put's an infodump to describe the character's personality or the introduction such as the background. Instead, I want the character introduction more into showing such as either on dialogue and action that the character did. So it can make the character more flesh out and fascinating. As for the main character, Ryu, I actually really like his cold personality and his less-talking demeanor. However, I believe the author will show more context about his backstory and even a significant development that I can't wait to see later chapters. Another praise I want to give is the very smooth and fluid writing. Especially on the sentence structuring, the imaginative word usages, and even the good grammar. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and this is one that has very good potential on the top ranking in Webnovel. Thank you and keep up the good work!!!
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thank you JJ. appreciate the long review ٩(๑•◡-๑)۶ⒽⓤⒼ❤ i will try ur suggestions in the following chapters regarding the information dumping. thank you for reading (∩˃o˂∩)♡
