I'm gonna say that I like this novel and enjoy the story. I advise you to continue without caring too much of bad reviews, listening to advices on how to write better can also help. I must say there aren't many JoJo fan fiction with good quality, if you improve the writing speed you may even have more success. Continue like this author, you are doing great 👍, I'm waiting to see this fan fiction become even better.
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