Even though it is a new book your work is great so far, i can totally see your efforts and your book has a lot of potential, it just needs a little editing and everything would be prefect, the characters are lovable especially the Mc. keep up the good work and good luck.

i love this story very much ❤❤❤............ can't wait for more chapters .................❤☺ keep up the good work 👏❤❤❤❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰

Stumbled upon this amazing work 🤗🤗 welp here goes my review: The language and writing quality is okay but will be better with proofreading rechecking and editing. Over all the story is good but with more effort it can turn into a gem. A little polish is what we need 😊good job author

Really an awesome work, the concept and plot is really good. The hype is maintained from the very beginning as the author introduced the 5 demon Kings. And, i think author is aware of his grammatical errors and is trying to improve them so i don't have to say much in that topic. But, overall i found this novel really enjoyable. Highly recommend.

This is a great story. I was really into it from the very first chapter, though i did see some grammar mistakes here and there. The flow is nice and the characters seem good enough. I'll be reading more! Good work

Wow, this is amazing! From the cover to the story, everything is unique. The author really has a way with words. I love the details and the explanations; the author really did a good job presenting the scenes. Kudos to you. Waiting for more chapters.

Okay i am the one person who really loves your work sis, i have been reading your book and you have been updating daily, i see the growth in your characters and how it affects others. Yes despite the few mistakes it is an awesome story.

Honestly all of the books I have read of the author are really good with something new everytime. I feel the characters are really interesting, like the way she introduced the demon kings. I like the intro of the demon kings, it is done really great and this is really my type of story. Hope that this will be a blast[img=update]

The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore. Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other. However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!