First thing first, this isn't for kids so any underage kid shouldn't be reading this. Coming to novel, the story goes fast there's this pace to the story that you feel while reading it. Which for some can feel too fast and for some it may feel appropriate as it keeps you at the edge of your story. But I do believe that there can be more. I liked the plot and I the way it is going. With some work this can be a really great novel and I do see potential in it! Keep up the good work :)
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