Item: Until I Say Your Name
Rating: 4
Author: iam_adh

iam_adhLv23yr

2022-01-20 07:21

I like how in the beginning the mood is set and the character is established. Some parts of it are a bit cliché but the author does well with the writing some parts are a bit confusing and need more description but besides that this story is good.

Until I Say Your Name

OneClaudia

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OneClaudiaAuthor

Thanks, the book will be in edition after its finished so I'll take into consideration your opinion thanks

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