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lazybod
lazybodLv32yr
2022-06-22 15:39

It has good baseline story and has quite a lot of potential, but personally I had to stop reading due to the grammar and the fact that some of the things the mc says is just a bit weird to me. I wish you luck in your endeavours and i might pick it up again in the future to see how much you have improved with time!

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Zailo95
Zailo95Lv14

So…when are you updating?

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