it's good, but the part where people keeping getting scared like shit and calling mommy for help us becoming too unrealistic, seems as though you just trying to make MC look bold and cool. honestly, what's with making everyone look so pathetic and MC look OP, the action is all about MC just beating the shit out of the enemy. as I keep reading this, it starting to get so predictable and cliche
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