Review Detail of Black_lotus_2004 in The Legacy of Thieves

Item: The Legacy of Thieves
Rating: 5

Review detail

Black_lotus_2004Lv132yrBlack_lotus_2004

Honestly.....this is a good novel, Your story is interesting and your grammar is also good...better than me lol.. I am not some expert or anything...but I could say that at least from what I have read till now, I can't find any mistakes in your novel. Well, best of luck for your journey ahead... from a fellow author 🤟

The Legacy of Thieves

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Happy_Person_8656AuthorHappy_Person_8656

Thanks a lot for the honest review. I am not offended at all and I appreciate your frankness. I have just stated the reason for my heavy description in the synopsis. Hope you understand :)

2yr

Black_lotus_2004Lv13Black_lotus_2004

Also!!! after reading other reviews...i found out that my review is not informative enough and I felt ashamed...so here is the continuation of my earlier review... Although your novel has good grammar, it has sometimes long descriptions about places or about how her eyes sparkled like a winter moon, her face glowed and she smiled like a bright sun in the sky etcetc....just example... Me, as a non native English speaker felt some what bored, because I felt like I was reading a poem or something... Long descriptions could be written in a nice and funny way ... I don't know maybe you could try describing in a funny way... These is my honest review, don't feel offended if you read this. Your much better at describing than me lol...

2yr