There is too much unnecessary pathos and cruelty, the author has confused the works, One piece is not about cruelty, it is about adventures and movements to a dream. And here, as usual, the main character is offended by something, I will become the strongest because the author's program is embedded in my brain, I will be friends with all the pirates, but at the same time I will kill all the non-key mobs by cutting them into two. Because of this ambivalent attitude to chapter 10, I decided that I had enough of this fan fiction.
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This is called Fan-Fiction for a reason I don't need to follow the fun adventure and dream path just to please you, you just read 10 chapters and you don't even know what his back story is, do you know the reason why he is cruel? the reason why he seeks allies? do you even know the reason behind his actions and what happened to him in the past. This is not a fair review if you ask me but I'll keep this one in hopes that you could give it another chance and continue reading.
I will pin this so that other readers won't just give a review base on 10 chapters. It's not fair to give a 2-star review when you don't even know the reasons behind his actions.
Seth08:I will pin this so that other readers won't just give a review base on 10 chapters. It's not fair to give a 2-star review when you don't even know the reasons behind his actions.
Estas equivocadoo Jove, One PIece no trata de aventuras. Dices eso porque ves el programa desde la vista de Luffy, pero el mundo de One Piece si es cruel.
see white, the world will be white, see black, the world will be black, the world is in the eye of the beholder, just because we see it from Luffy's optimistic perspective doesn't mean that it is or is not. It's just the sight of the Straw Hats, nothing more, nothing less. Your review is so one-sided…
Isso é assim pelo visão do protagonista, o mundo em si é sobre piratas e o que eles fazem?.... a tripulação do luffy é uma das unicas exceções
thanks for keeping me from wasting my time.
his review is total bs lol
Shaska:thanks for keeping me from wasting my time.
Did you add those in the first 10 chapters? I read your story up to 10 chapters and none of what you had written details all of what you had said. It's pure hypocritical to say that when you have not mentioned in full detail those points in the first 10 chapters. I simply read your story for those comments and I would say I will not invest time into your story, but you seem very confident about your skills in writing to make a reader wait out past 10 chapters. I certainly have not been persuaded to stay a good day to you writer.
Seth08:This is called Fan-Fiction for a reason I don't need to follow the fun adventure and dream path just to please you, you just read 10 chapters and you don't even know what his back story is, do you know the reason why he is cruel? the reason why he seeks allies? do you even know the reason behind his actions and what happened to him in the past. This is not a fair review if you ask me but I'll keep this one in hopes that you could give it another chance and continue reading.
Of course not, why would I write everything in 10 chapters? If you didn't like it then I can't do anything about it, I am confident in my story and I know that it's not for everyone, I can't force anyone to like my story but I will surely defend it to those who give a low review base on just 10 chapters.
TOFIE:Did you add those in the first 10 chapters? I read your story up to 10 chapters and none of what you had written details all of what you had said. It's pure hypocritical to say that when you have not mentioned in full detail those points in the first 10 chapters. I simply read your story for those comments and I would say I will not invest time into your story, but you seem very confident about your skills in writing to make a reader wait out past 10 chapters. I certainly have not been persuaded to stay a good day to you writer.
I highly recommend that you put Tags that's related to the personality of the MC/Vibe of the story. so, some randos doesn't go full on "Keyboard warrior" on the reviews, just from personal experience.
Seth08:This is called Fan-Fiction for a reason I don't need to follow the fun adventure and dream path just to please you, you just read 10 chapters and you don't even know what his back story is, do you know the reason why he is cruel? the reason why he seeks allies? do you even know the reason behind his actions and what happened to him in the past. This is not a fair review if you ask me but I'll keep this one in hopes that you could give it another chance and continue reading.
One piece is not about cruelty, but what about piracy? Lol. The world of one piece is quite cruel ya know.
