It's quite good. I know other people don't like when the MC joins the straw hats, but I enjoy seeing how they change the story. Also, please don't have MC be a weaker and a dog to Luffy. That's what ruined the Shinobi of the Straw hats for me, the MC was constantly having his achievements downplayed as Luffy's idea and he was always weaker than Luffy. Keep it up though.
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