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Review Detail of HawkxNinja in Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

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HawkxNinja
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Good story and characters but irresponsible mc that doesn't think about the consequences of his actions and just says "i'll handle it" when he clearly isn't capable of handling some of the enemies he's making. Story also progresses really slow because of filler and multiple perspectives- in some mini arcs mc is only in about 50-60% of the scenes- but it doesn't feel slow until you realise it's been 200 chapters and the story has barely moved. The writing quality is like a good MTL. Sometimes words are used incorrectly completely changing the meaning of the sentence. All sentences still make sense if you just change a few words in your head while you're reading it. Meanwhile, the author's favourite colour is blue.

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Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

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HawkxNinja
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Also the filler is usually good so it doesn't feel like it's dragging out the story with boring content.

manish_tiwari_3119
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Do you know if diya dies or not?

HawkxNinja:Also the filler is usually good so it doesn't feel like it's dragging out the story with boring content.
HawkxNinja
HawkxNinjaLv11HawkxNinja

She's still alive at chapter 520.

manish_tiwari_3119:Do you know if diya dies or not?
HawkxNinja
HawkxNinjaLv11HawkxNinja

That sounds quite ominous... she doesn't die at chapter 521, I've just only read to chapter 520.

HawkxNinja:She's still alive at chapter 520.