Review Detail of Chance_Bramlett in Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
Review detail
I enjoy the story but the number of errors in the writing itself is atrocious. I understand that many of these stories are translated, however, that does not excuse the lack or capital letters or other punctuation. Please also work on defining when someone is speaking more clearly. I missed half of a conversation because I thought the MC was talking to himself.
Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
SHIVAM_Chouksey
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And it's not even lack of capital letters. It's more like capital letter are just sprinkled in everywhere randomly. Most sentences have several capital letters for random words, then you also lack capital letters where it should be. It's just so weird, capitalization is maybe the most universal and easiest grammar rule there is. Basically you only have to remember to capitalize first letter of the sentence and names of various kinds and you are 99% there.