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Altara_Blue
Altara_BlueLv143yr
2021-11-05 03:07

grammar is bad, but i like the story. Please use some kind of grammar app or something like that it is really annoying (sorry for my bad english)

Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

SHIVAM_Chouksey
4.6
967 Chs

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PokeSon
PokeSonLv2

Your ironies fall flat because he isn't a writer.

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2yr
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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Then have it translated better? Cmon, you can use common sense can’t you? This is straight up MTL translation for money

PokeSon:Your ironies fall flat because he isn't a writer.
1yr
3
Lingchen_Ye
Lingchen_YeLv2

trash novel

3mth
1
AK_Creation
AK_CreationLv2

More episode uplode please

13d
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Daoist_Pikachu
Daoist_PikachuLv1

if you want to read something lewd and funny, this novel is for you... i love the mc he is smart, funny and very op... its new novel so its don't have many chapters... but hope we will get more chapters soon...i love the other novel which called snake evolution system... written by same author ...

3yr

yuri_inharemnotntr
yuri_inharemnotntrLv15

No doubt good story potential but my man get a editor or someone to check your grammar. That is the biggest weak point of this book. But other than that keep it up.

3yr
TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

I am the Exp of my sword... EXP is my blood... EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless Reviews... Unknown to death,nor to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless Reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so i pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

2yr
EIo_Police
EIo_PoliceLv15

The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality... I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.

2yr
DaoistIXNnnk
DaoistIXNnnkLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
MadHat
MadHatLv14

I would say that I am having fun reading this right now despite some of the writing errors however the big downfall of the novel for me is that the story progression is too slow. I know that it is a new novel but taking more than 5-10 chapters for a scene to progress is kind of annoying but all in all it still fun

3yr
Hannah_Misa
Hannah_MisaLv1

somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and mature that is best. so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.

3yr
Echelon_5
Echelon_5Lv15

Aside from the obvious problems being the grammar( which at the my current chapter 221, has gotten much better then the beginning) this novel is actually really good and fun to read honestly author has mentioned repeatedly that hes not a native English speaker and also cant hire an editor so I can't be too harsh considering the story is really good and intriguing mc is good, a little weird in the beginning but once things gets rolling he becomes much better. some of the FL so far are a bit generic innocent lovey bombshells (diya,jasmine, natasha) although diya's character is becoming more interesting recently with her plot developments the backstory with xiao feng and mc and the past forgotten by mc is also pretty interesting All in all if you can look past the grammar and whatnot this is really a hidden gem that has potential enough to trump some of the "top rated" swill on this app Great Work keep it up !!

3yr
Madhav_Agnihotry
Madhav_AgnihotryLv1

hlo author can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillers and these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count

2yr
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