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2021-11-04 01:48

Such a good novel with twists and turns it definitely leaves you wanting more even at the end!! it's thrilling definitely had my emotions running wild with the characters.. there was a few confusing parts because it switches from present to future events and back i might be wrong but i think they were put into the wrong place and should be where the actual time they occur is instead.. but definitely a great read!! if ever there is a sequel or sequels to this I'm most definitely going to have to it or them!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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it should say I'm definitely going to have to read it or them.. somehow "read" got cut out by accident..

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Omg, thank you for reviewing my book! I've been occupied so I haven't had the time or the motivation to edit the story. unfortunately, I locked it too early but I thought about doing a sequel.

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I've begun the sequel! Check it out on my profile!

Jennielynn9687:it should say I'm definitely going to have to read it or them.. somehow "read" got cut out by accident..
Jennielynn9687
Jennielynn9687Lv14

So just added it to my library definitely will start reading it as well 😊😊😉🙃

FavourEkele_1969:I've begun the sequel! Check it out on my profile!
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