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MinhNam_Le
MinhNam_LeLv43yr
2021-10-10 19:27

everything about this fanfic is perfect. Story telling is fast paced and focus on the main point, not dragging out with useless training arc that full of useless stuff that we already know or useless stuff in the og story that contribute nothing new to the fanfic. The MC is like the omega chad that doesn't think with his d**k which is super welcome. Plot holes are kept to minimum. Grammar and vocabulary are also very good with rarely any typo mystake. All in all a very well written story with a lot of care and love from author.

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xX_Overlord_N_Xx
4.4
78 Chs

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Justin_McIlwain
Justin_McIlwainLv1

I personally don't like fast paced stories because it messes up the story pacing and feels lest thought out. On a scale of 1 to 10 how fast paced is this?

2yr
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

This is a rumbling of mentally ill person. The only reason it has such high rating is coz author delete 1 star ratings. I have rated it many times he remove them after a period of time.

Justin_McIlwain:I personally don't like fast paced stories because it messes up the story pacing and feels lest thought out. On a scale of 1 to 10 how fast paced is this?
1yr
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xX_Overlord_N_Xx
xX_Overlord_N_XxAuthor

I'm totally a random fan so don't mind me. I just wanted to rate this amazing piece of art 5/5. Everything is cool. Even author is super sexy. I even donated him some money on patrëon.com/OverlordN You should too. It is money well spent. Totally readable stuff and author isn't stupid so he learnt his mistakes from the previous novel and wrote something even better.

3yr

Dookie_Man
Dookie_ManLv3

i shall give this a chance [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Hero_MT
Hero_MTLv5

Good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Noname126
Noname126Lv4

Hmm I think I read something similar I don't mean ur copying i am just saying i saw a fanfic similar to this anyway good job just hope the chapters would be longer

3yr
AmOnHolidays
AmOnHolidaysLv2

So I didn't read much but seems similar to blackening Naruto or something , that was the novel , the concept is same except in there mc was alive and got into Naruto head in here he is inside as a souls will give a try and see if it gets any more good

3yr
MarkinBitchs
MarkinBitchsLv2

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend], a evil mc for a heads up. I personally love evil mcs or selfish ones so five stars.

3yr
syrus0star
syrus0starLv3

stop using box to rate your trash fanfic

1yr
Emo_necromancer
Emo_necromancerLv4

Last book was good looking forward to this one

3yr
MelinaU
MelinaULv2

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3yr
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Fake high rating from b0.ts, author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments.

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