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2021-07-16 10:32

Writing Quality: Kinda good, I don't see too many mistakes for an author that just writes his first ever story. The story flows rather well. at least, it's better than most stories out there, but not the best. 4+1 pity stars. Story Development: it's rather so-so. It's not too slow, but it isn't like the author will shove 30 different characters at your face. 3 stars. Character Design: Good enough, but more should be more desired. I'd like if the author flushes more about the character. however, it's only three chapters as of the writing of this book. so... 3 stars until I update it via my comment. Stability: Good World Background: This is my favorite part. The author actually dares to use real country name instead of country A and country Z. in my opinion, this is a good thing since we actually know what the author means and the stereotype of each country. The military background is rather good as well using brevity code and all. this is so far very interesting. anyway. keep up the good work.

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