Review Detail of Crow_Tales in The Tale of Two Sisters

The story reads like a Victorian novel. To those who enjoy such timely pieces, then this will be a good fit for you. My main critiques are: the lack of character names in the beginning and the multiple parted chapters. Perhaps each chapter could stand alone with another title instead of being noted as "Reunion" parts 1-3. Such a remark is minimal. The overall flow of the tale is steady and bringing the dynamics of twin sisters is an engaging take. Especially when the husband of one deems to take matters into his own hands. Overall, the conflict to come will be engaging to watch.