this could have been Divine if it didn't have overpowered cheats but it is still good .,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

it is simply perfection .,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.*.,.,.,.,.,..,...,......,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,

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This one is alright. It is quite faced paced but still manages to do some world building. Also it is an original concept. Overall this is one of the better ones this week.

Ron +8

Why Is this book taking a break? I thought it got through the energy vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Only so-so. But with so much trash they put into trial reads it's no wonder people will come to sign praises about novels like this;p It seems like pure mtl is the way to find good novels these days.

This one is alright. It is quite faced paced but still manages to do some world building. Also it is an original concept. Overall this is one of the better ones this week.

Its one of the best trial reads. I Like it. if you read trial reads then this One is just for you. Although there are mistakes here and there, its A trial read… you cant expect much from one lol