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Review Detail of Luloli in Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades

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Luloli
LuloliLv62yrLuloli

Reads like an elementary student's understanding of science, economics, and human interaction. Basically nothing makes sense and hurts my brain reading characters doing such stupidity.

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Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades

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DarkAngel1005
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Agreed, its all over the place. this guys needs an editor or at least a proofreader maybe?

PrimordialDragon
PrimordialDragonLv5PrimordialDragon

Author needs to upgrade his brain first. This novel is just a mashup of everything you can find out there. Its so inconsistent and stupid.

DarkAngel1005:Agreed, its all over the place. this guys needs an editor or at least a proofreader maybe?