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2021-10-30 14:37

You know the story is a good one when you read the prologue, know it isn't fantasy so you need to close the novel just to see the tags and pray that the tragedy tag is not there because you were already shipping the characters for their happy ending. At least this is what happened to me. (sadly, the tragedy tag is in this story) I think my rating says it all. From the prologue I was captivated, and each chapter is developed and described so perfectly that there it leaves the reviewer with just one word: AWESOME! Keep writing! I hope to read more about Marcus and Ayesha in the future (even if the prologue broke my heart into tiny pieces)

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Luminous_Arcadian
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I had a schadenfreude moment when I read about what the tragedy tag has given you. Thank you for reading, and I'll try to keep up with the chapters.

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