From the very beginning of reading, there were vague doubts, especially at the moment of chambord islands, when I reached qiwuhai, everything fell into place, and I dropped this work in advance until blood flowed from my eyes.

Robin: what should we do..? Croc: You are asking me ... who tf should I be asking.... 🤣🙌😂 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

It’s good, but the grammar mistakes take over the story. It feels like a google translated chinese story. Except that the story is good, Crocodile is an interesting character with lots of potential.

I'm giving 3.8 but I should give less because I find the story interesting even though I know it's not yours. so author you said you are translating right? well if so why don't you change this quiwai to shichibukai ?to me it seems you took it from mtl and posted here saying it is your translation, i may be wrong but if you really are translating then errors like this one would not appear so much. just a tip if you're really translating go on mtl and see the most obvious mistakes and then change to what makes the most sense in the context it will be much better even if it's not perfect to read this fanfic (google tranlation)

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I've finally finished reading the raws, I'm not gonna comment on the writing quality either on this website nor on the raws, as raws are usually bad writing quality. I honestly enjoyed the overall feeling of the novel, there are some stuff I'm slightly bitter about but nothing too big or much. Rosen (mc) / Crocodile as a character worked really well into the story, and the story had him as a main focus and didn't set focus on Straw Hats (which I liked that the focus was only on Crocodile). As One Piece isn't finished yet, the author had to make his own twist, which worked pretty well, and the author changed some parts into the story too. all in all, a really enjoyable read.

Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................